On a spring holiday, Kristine and her whole family decided to go to the park and just relax. Kristine decided to enjoy the scenery. She saw pretty flowers. Those flowers smelled like a beautiful fragrant perfume. Behind all those flowers, was an old door. The old door was a bit broken and it was dusty. It would have looked beautiful if it was cleaned. Kristine touched and cleaned the door handle. She twisted, then pushed it. She decided to go in. When she got in, she closed her eyes and smelled the scent of those flowers. Then, when she opened her eyes, she noticed a magnificent garden. She also observed a lot of beautiful creatures. She spotted fairies roaming around. Two of the fairies was heading towards her. The fairies looked pleasant, but a bit weird. They had braided their hair in a satisfying way. They also have gorgeous eyes and they’re lovely wings were colourful as a rainbow.
You have done really well on describing words.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could use different vocabulary,other than that it was really good.