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Tuesday 20 September 2016

Deianira's Narrative 20/9

One warm day, Chris and his dog Buddy went for a walk to relax. Buddy is a dog who has a brown and fluffy hair. He is also a dog who is very entertainment.They wanted to relax because they were exhausted from work. They went for a walk near the ocean and they decided to sit on the deck. They could feel the fresh air that came from the warm and good-looking ocean. They had a good view of the ocean and saw something in the distance. “It looks like a secret island” said Chris looking towards the island patting Buddy’s back. They can see mountains and buildings in the island. They could also see the shadows of the buildings and mountains in the water. It looks beautiful and exciting. It’s was fun to watch the island. Birds are flying at the top of the Island. They couldn't see any people in the island. It looks like the island is gonna be mysterious. Chris predicted that when someone found out about the island, it’s gonna be real famous.

1 comment:

  1. I liked how you used descriptive words to describe things, I think you could improve on is your vocab.

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